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I would love to get the witchy community critique on this design. I love it so much, but something is missing.
updated 2 years, 10 months ago
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It looks awesome, but I think the snake head to body ratio looks a tiny bit off— maybe making the head a little smaller or having another coil of body could help?
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I love this too. Maybe bump up the contrast on the snake and tooth. Lighten the tooth, darken the snake. That might help both of them pop off the background a little more.
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Suggestion: Choose your favorite glyph/sigil (or make your own) for that nice white space on the tooth in the upper right. Or perhaps include ‘Nagi.’ Just some thoughts to play with.
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Greenery! And maybe the tooth needs a gold crown 🙂
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Hello! This is your piece, so you know best, but I think it’s perfect the way it is. I like it so much that I went to your Etsy hoping you had it as a sticker or tray or something.
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Maybe some snazzy saying on a banner like, “watch out, I bite” or somesuch? I can’t think of anything else composition-wise. It’s well balanced.
